Pitch

We had a pitch! And with pitch comes the inevitable criticism of the work! Don't get me wrong, I'm happy that this criticism comes, because It gives me another perspective on my design! So here is my crude list of things people suggested I changed..!

-Make the "or" smaller, or get rid of it completely, find another way to get the point across

-If your using the "or", make the shape the DE logo shape.

-Do some mock ups of different orientations, to show how it can be used in different formats.

-Move around the package shots, it looked really busy in the one I showed everyone.

-Have a think about a good tagline.